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1/8/09 8:14 P

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That was just a marvelous piece of poetry. Hats off to you and keep up the great work. I needed some inspiration to keep getting my mind on creating more poetry. I have created one recently but it's not coming as fast as I wish it would.

Here's a poem I created:

The Wonders of Living Today

Here we are our eyes wide open,
Wondering is it just a dream!
We feel, and think, and act...
Just imagine what else, at that!

It's been a long road for me
With all my trials you see,
And mistakes along the way
Will surely make one pay.

I can't believe 50 years has past
As it seems it went like in a flash
Today is all we have to live
Wondering, gathering, living,....

Happy to be me right here
With all my feelings so dear
God will guide me all the way
As I wonder while living today.


Information is powerful to the human mind so embrace your journey wisely.


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1/7/09 12:27 P

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emoticon That's good!

That's REAL good! I love it!!! That is really a great poem, thank you SO much for sharing that!

Wow, you are talented!..




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1/7/09 6:26 A

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I have lost my way

In the dark forest of my tangled life
And un-realised dreams.
Running blindly for too long
Tripped by the roots
Of my responsibilities
Ensnared by the branches
Of my conscience.

I have lost my way

The sea-roar of the wind
The clamour of the storm
Rages all around
Envelops me
Drowns out my voice
My feet no longer know the rightful road
Weed strewn and strangled
It lays hidden

I have lost my way

Put me on the path again
Through the cathedral calm
Of the sun speared glade
To the open skies and freedom lands
Oh please come find me

For I have lost my way.



MAGS


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