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12/19/08 2:26 P

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I also made a poem out of the Rainbowland Playtime story and here it is:

Rainbowland Playtime Poem

The rainbow creatures are out today
Playing beyond the golden pathway
Through the mysterious woodlands they creep
Trying not to make a single peep!

Sweetly scented air coming from someplace.
Now, those rainbow creatures were in a race.
Geego”, the frog, wearing big-rimmed glasses
Hears running water far off in the tall grasses.

Do you think maybe this is the enchanted place…
We’re looking for that magical face.
Magical waterfalls are just over the horizon
Hurry everyone…there could be a bison!

Well low and behold a fresh smelling spring
And even fish are singing their thing
Wildly coloured flowers, growing like gold!
Here is a place no one ever told.

How quiet and peaceful this wonderland feels
Just the place that could create many deals,
Surrounded by gods’ natural beauty you see
Here you can be yourself and feel free.

Created by Patricia Gooderham 2008


Let me know what you think...ty

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12/19/08 2:09 P

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Nice to hear that you enjoyed my little story. I do have another piece which I have put on another website...here's the link to it..and the artwork is mine too...

http://dailystrength.org/groups/poetry-f
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12/19/08 12:36 P

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I love your objective. To get others to see from their own minds how beautiful their worlds can truly be if they just tried to make it so.

Thank you, so much for sharing that! I love that you have such a vivid imagination! I also hope to read more writing of yours!

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Desiree




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PATRICIAROSE7's Photo PATRICIAROSE7 Posts: 668
12/18/08 4:36 P

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RAINBOWLAND PLAYTIME

The rainbow creatures are out today from a wonderful place beyond the golden pathway. They’re making their way across the mysterious woodlands. While walking on the pathway, these rainbow creatures could smell the sweetly scented air coming from someplace.
All of a sudden,“Geego”,the frog, wearing big-rimmed glasses, hears in the distance running water sounds. Do you think maybe this is the enchanted place we’re looking for that has a magic waterfall in it? Geego could see off in the horizon a beautiful rainbow falls. Just ahead, right where this fresh smelling spring fed waterfall was created, low and behold there were thousands of scattered wild flowers. These blossoming colored flowers were so magnificent that your mind could only imagine. Just think how quiet and peaceful this wonderland feels to you being surrounded by all gods’ natural beauty. Let’s lie back in these flowers and gaze out at the blue-crystallized lake that also appeared at the bottom of the waterfalls. So smooth this lake shimmered that you could skate across it at anytime. Would you like to listen to something wonderful? In Geegos magic rainbow jacket, which he took off and put it by the tree next to the glistening lake, was a tape. All the rainbow creatures decided to take a little snooze here under the magic rainbow tree, as the (Breaking the Mist) tape was playing relaxing music. Keep imagining that special place that you can go to for it will give you that love and warmth and feeling of happiness. That place where you can rejuvenate your body, mind and soul.
Come let us ride, just travel, to a far off land, on a rainbowland carpet! Drifting into another world, someone heard, “Who said that carpet comes into my special place?”

It was princess Nok-a-Nok, who spoke. She said that that ratty carpet needed some more colour to its threads. To everyone’s surprise, the princess sprinkled her gold dust in the air…Can you imagine what happened next? Maybe something would appear out of nowhere, or out pops an animal. Well to our surprise, the rainbow gold dust turned that ratty carpet into a shiny new rainbow rug! While all this synergy was glowing about, peeking around the rainbow tree was an itsy-bitsy worm. “What’s the matter little worm?” asked the princess. The sad looking worm had a surprised look on his face as to think that someone was actually talking to him. The princess asked the worm if his name was as colourful as all the other things in this place. “NO!” the worm replied. I have a name that everyone calls me at home and it’s “Sneaky”. I’m a tiny slithering creature who likes to wander in the tall green grass once in a while, ever so minding my own business like others do. Geego says that princess Nok-a-Nok will help you feel better all over and then you will be happy today, OK Sneaky? Sneaky liked this idea and slithered up the nearest tree, looking for a tasty juicy heart-icicle to eat. At that moment, a burst of “Yaa-Hooo!” was heard for miles around. Well I guess you know what happened then.
Let your creature mind flow and think of where you might travel next. I’ll leave you here at this moment in time and give you a tip to ponder upon. This day was so unbelievable and fantastic that I hope you and your friends will dream of lovely magical thoughts…(Maybe rainbow balloons are waiting for you on the next travel?) Anything that makes you happy and warm all over inside is something really precious to hold onto.

Don’t forget that Rainbow Children can be what you want in life. All you have to do is relax and think of that safe place to visit from time to time when life brings your down.
A place of beauty and solitude is our minds.

Go Ahead and HUG someone today! It’s FREE .to BEE! ME…J


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12/18/08 3:46 P

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It is important to be visual-- how else could we live our lives???




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12/17/08 11:09 P

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Awe...thank you for the vote of confidence...I will try it out and see where it goes....Right now it's buried but will try to work on it soon as I am still feeling crappy!....:( Glad to know that you are a visual person too....It's great to know others so you can make some kind of a connection to keep one's spirit inspired and motivated...:)

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12/17/08 11:01 A

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If you'd like to share that story with us all that would be wonderful. I'm sure we'd all enjoy it! By visual do you mean we'd all have to have a pretty big imagination to understand it and see it through your eyes? I'm sure I could do it! I'm a very visual person.. lol!

Hope you feel better soon!




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12/16/08 11:42 P

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I have a story put away in my binder somewhere but it's a long one and I think that my English teacher from Canadore College here in parry Sound said that it's a more visual story. If you want me to post it i can. But am going to get to bed and get some zzzz's to deal with this nasty cold. Thank god i see the doctor tomorrow and i hope he will give me something to get this cold to clear up...Nite and pleasant dreams for everyone tonight....:)

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12/16/08 11:16 P

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Hello.
Unfortunetly I'm not that much of a story writer so I don't have any stories for you. I mean I could write a story but I'm more of a poet so... this is for all of those story writers out there! Anybody who would like to share their stories, please do so here!




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