I think the poem gives us a whole new perspective on what it is like to be a twin. I knew a set of identical twins. One had a mole and the other didn't . The one with the mole was nicer to me, so even without the mole I could tell the different. I am fascinated by all of this.
I believe a poem should be true to how you feel (at least how you felt at the time you wrote it). Thank you for sharing your poem.
Since you are the oldest you have to set the example. Really, being older is something that uniquely sets you apart.
I am older! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was kind of disappointed that someone I sent it to thought it was depressing and somewhat disparaging, which I never intended at all. They told me to throw it out.
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