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If I saw Through Your eyes~

Wednesday, January 15, 2014

If I looked through your eyes
at the world~
what would I see??
Would I be surprised~
Or maybe mesmerised~
Could I walk in your shoes~
if I saw through your eyes??
Would I feel what you feel~
could I understand~
where you've been~
What would I see??
if I stepped in your shadow~
Envisioning your emotions~
seen the places you've been~
Hearts may be broken~
Would I see that??
Could I touch what you feel??
Should I even imagine~
that I know how you feel??

I like writing and I was playing my daily bingo game on facebook and this one
entered my head. Sometimes stuff just comes to me. A word or a phrase and I go with it.. The truth is none of us have lived anybody else's life and as much as we follow a similar journey we have different places we have been.


Member Comments About This Blog Post:
TINADEE86 1/27/2014 10:37AM

    Love It!! Thanks for sharing!!

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KIM22211 1/21/2014 2:06PM

    that is beautiful and something we need to think about always before quick to cast judgement on others! thank you

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ANGELN325 1/20/2014 8:30AM

    So true. Everyone's journey is unique.

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KAREN608 1/19/2014 12:06AM

    Thanks for blogging that!

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REMONA100 1/18/2014 6:55PM

    You are a very talented writer. Loved it and so insightful.

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BUBBLETOES165 1/18/2014 11:09AM

    Love it!! emoticon

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MONTANAWALKER 1/16/2014 4:51AM

    WOW!! This is great. You are very creative!

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STEVEN2GO2 1/15/2014 7:09PM

    Yes we are all unique, and have different views of life and emotions! All these differences are the spice to life!

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GRANDMABABA 1/15/2014 1:30PM

    Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.

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8THMILITIA 1/15/2014 1:29PM

    That is so awesome! It would be wonderful if that were possible because you can never tell what someone is truly going through! Thank you for sharing with us!

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WALLAHALLA 1/15/2014 11:04AM

    I admire your creativity! You're very talented.

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PATTYKLAVER 1/15/2014 10:00AM

    It's beautiful. If we could only do this.....

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AWESOMECHELZ 1/15/2014 9:04AM

    You wrote that poem? It is amazing! OH, and it is SO true too. Thanks so much for sharing this morning. emoticon emoticon

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CELEST 1/15/2014 8:01AM

    This is so beautiful....could I put it on fb for my niece to see?

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MYAKAYAH 1/15/2014 7:42AM

    very lovely poetry, fabulous~

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DMEYER4 1/15/2014 6:33AM

  this is great thanks for sharing your thoughts

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JANUT57 1/15/2014 5:46AM

    emoticon nice!

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