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A TREE'S GIFT- a poem I wrote re-blogging for TREV (a little racey)

Tuesday, October 22, 2013


Her spirit rejoices in your heart,
you can feel her graciousness with your eyes,
you can taste her beauty with your nose,
you can hear her as her gorgeous long legs lift up to the sun,
her thousands of toes all dressed in nature’s finest greenery.
Her erotic twists, turns, cracks and crevices,
moon and swoon on an autumn’s warm afternoon.

She swims waist deep,
her hair of roots and hands underground,
submerging deeply she accepts juices from the earth’s womb.
As the life force moves through her veins,
expanding, pulsating, exploding,
she shares her oxygenic gifts with reverence,
like an aphrodisiac to all who breathe.

November 22, 1998
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    beautifufl! I loved it! You are a wonderful writer!

    1483 days ago
    emoticon I love your writing. It really describes the beauty of the trees.
    1489 days ago
  • TREV1964
    You describe it as racey - I would go one more and say explicit too. It is very intimate without lacking sensitivity and considering the irregularity of the syllables in each line it flows most beautifully.
    If this is the standard of your work across the board you really should be published if you are not already.

    Great stuff that is very well composed.


    1490 days ago
    Very nice! HUGS!
    1491 days ago
    A great poem. Love trees.
    1491 days ago
    Wow! I almost need to smoke a cigarette now! lol lol Just kidding -- I don't smoke!
    1491 days ago
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