Advertisement -- Learn more about ads on this site.

    SPARKLINGME176   157,956
150,000-199,999 SparkPoints

A TREE'S GIFT- a poem I wrote re-blogging for TREV (a little racey)

Tuesday, October 22, 2013


Her spirit rejoices in your heart,
you can feel her graciousness with your eyes,
you can taste her beauty with your nose,
you can hear her as her gorgeous long legs lift up to the sun,
her thousands of toes all dressed in nature’s finest greenery.
Her erotic twists, turns, cracks and crevices,
moon and swoon on an autumn’s warm afternoon.

She swims waist deep,
her hair of roots and hands underground,
submerging deeply she accepts juices from the earth’s womb.
As the life force moves through her veins,
expanding, pulsating, exploding,
she shares her oxygenic gifts with reverence,
like an aphrodisiac to all who breathe.

November 22, 1998

Member Comments About This Blog Post:
LINDAMARIEZ1 10/30/2013 2:29PM

    beautifufl! I loved it! You are a wonderful writer!


Report Inappropriate Comment
TIME2BLOOM4ME 10/24/2013 11:10AM

    emoticon I love your writing. It really describes the beauty of the trees.

Report Inappropriate Comment
TREV1964 10/23/2013 5:00PM

    You describe it as racey - I would go one more and say explicit too. It is very intimate without lacking sensitivity and considering the irregularity of the syllables in each line it flows most beautifully.
If this is the standard of your work across the board you really should be published if you are not already.

Great stuff that is very well composed.



Report Inappropriate Comment
MSLZZY 10/22/2013 5:14PM

    Very nice! HUGS!

Report Inappropriate Comment
JUSTYNA7 10/22/2013 3:58PM

    A great poem. Love trees.

Report Inappropriate Comment
FELINEBETTER 10/22/2013 3:25PM

    Wow! I almost need to smoke a cigarette now! lol lol Just kidding -- I don't smoke!

Report Inappropriate Comment

Add Your Comment to the Blog Post

Log in to post a comment.

Disclaimer: Weight loss results will vary from person to person. No individual result should be seen as a typical result of following the SparkPeople program.