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Friday, July 05, 2013

You know my Freestyle Friday is about Poems I write just before I post the blog. It's funny how the first two line rolled out of my head but then GOD changed it from what I thought it would be to this sort of testimony. I always appreciate your support. I offer you an opportunity to read my poem from July 4. I really liked writing that one with The Lord's Inspiration. Be Blessed! emoticon

"My Dream Manifested"
Rolled out my bed;
With rollers in my head;
Slow was my tread;
As I slid into the bathroom…
I loomed-
In the mirror;
And I drew nearer-
“Who’s that?”
“I’m no longer fat!”
Look what the Lord has done…
The battle is won!
All those walks at the park;
Logging on to Spark;
Tracking my food;
Smiling to change my mood;
Living with motivation;
Friends of inspiration;
A walk is my vacation;
Wearing smaller clothes;
Giving away those…
That are saggy and baggy;
Feeling FREE!
God has truly Blessed Me!
This can happen to YOU!
Be faithful and true…
To yourself-
For there’s HELP!
My Dream Manifested-
As I arrested…
Those desires of my flesh;
I passed the test;
Oh How I’m Blessed;
This IS Great Success!
By Deborah Edwards 7/5/13


Member Comments About This Blog Post:
PENNEYV 7/7/2013 11:36PM

    emoticon love the poem!o

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CINDYCHARLENE 7/7/2013 10:55PM

    A beautiful poem by a beautiful lady. You have so amazingly well with the help of the good Lord. Thank you for sharing.

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LUNADRAGON 7/6/2013 1:32PM

    Yes! Praise God for leading our way!

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SHADOWGHOSTY 7/6/2013 7:45AM

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WARRIORGIRL121 7/5/2013 11:11PM

    emoticon Deb! and you look amazing! Beautiful, Sis! :)

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KADULAC 7/5/2013 8:34PM

    I long for the day that is my own thought. Could I copy your poem for my own person journal?

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MAMAJAHMAI 7/5/2013 5:11PM

    Another amazing Poem! And from a beautiful lady, INSIDE and OUT! emoticon

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WORKNPROGRESS49 7/5/2013 2:55PM

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GEMINIGEM6 7/5/2013 2:26PM

    I LOVE this! So inspirational Deb! And you look FABULOUS dahling! Yay!

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MJ7DM33 7/5/2013 2:01PM

  emoticon Love it! What a cutie in your background pic!

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