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I See

Wednesday, May 08, 2013

Well, I've been down and out a lot lately. Fighting depression as I go off my meds that I can't afford nor want to be on to begin with. So, before I signed off and went to bed, I wanted to share something with my friends. I used to write poetry. The one I'm going to share with you today is the best one I've ever written, and yes, it has been published by me before, so no copyright infringement. I may share more if that's what it looks like people would like. I'm thinking of going back into writing poetry, but the sad part is is that the only good stuff I come up with comes when I'm depressed. So gotta figure that one out. Anyways, here it is. I hope you all enjoy.

I See

I see faces that pass me by,
Without a glance, I wonder why.
I see fights and war, without any peace.
People cry for release.
I see evil get its way.
What good there is, flies away.
I see lovers turn to others with sympathy.
Why can't they just have empathy?
I see people hush.
My heart feels like mush.
I see that love is gone.
Gone, for very long.
I see people die,
While others lie.
I see babies born,
But why do they look so forlorn?
I see faces that pass me by,
Without a glance, I wonder why.
I see evil get its way.
What good there is, flies away.
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FOXENSFANCY 5/10/2013 1:24PM

    good luck getting off of the meds. I hope it works for you.

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NUTRON3 5/9/2013 8:50AM

    Very good!

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SUSANBEAMON 5/9/2013 12:47AM

  write, whither it's good or not, writing loosens the demons in depression, or so i've found. i used to write lots back when i was younger.

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KOFFEENUT 5/8/2013 10:57PM

    You SHOULD write more poetry - and not all of it will come from a sad place!

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ANNELIZABETH918 5/8/2013 10:21PM

    I love it! You should share these more often!

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