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Breathless ---A New Poem

Tuesday, May 07, 2013

So I just took a trip to Maryland and DC to visit my friend from college. I wrote this poem on the train on my way back home. I was feeling hopeless romantic! Enjoy!


I can feel him out there
He's out there somewhere
Closer than I realize
I wonder what he's doing
Or if he's looking for me too
Just waiting for that moment
When our eyes meet
And my heart stops
I'm breathless
You're what I've been waiting for
But never thought I'd find
The past, it doesn't hurt anymore
When I'm with you I'm free
We can dance under the stars
Talk until the sun comes up
Fight all day, make up all night
What an adventure it'll be
Let's take this chance
We're both forever changed
It's something worth fighting for
'Cause we can make it last forever.


Member Comments About This Blog Post:
BUSYGRANNY5 5/8/2013 7:04AM

    What an awesome poem! Keep looking, he's out there!!!

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WINDSONG~ 5/8/2013 3:54AM


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LOSINGLINNDY 5/7/2013 11:20PM

    This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

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JENNIEONFIRE 5/7/2013 9:15PM

    awww he's out there my dear! I know he is :)

Maybe he's with my potential guy as well..maybe they are best friends like cool would that be...

I love all of your poems should make a book of your work

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