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"String Quartet" A poem by Carl Dennis

Sunday, May 05, 2013

String Quartet

by Carl Dennis

Art and life, I wouldn't want to confuse them.
But it's hard to hear this quartet
Without comparing it to a conversation
Of the quiet kind, where no one tries to outtalk
The other participants, where each is eager instead
To share in the task of moving the theme along
From the opening statement to the final bar.

A conversation that isn't likely to flourish
When sales technicians come trolling for customers,
Office-holders for votes, preachers for converts.
Many good people among such talkers,
But none engaged like the voices of the quartet
In resisting the plots time hatches to make them unequal,
To set them at odds, to pull them asunder.

I love the movement where the cello is occupied
With repeating a single phrase while the others
Strike out on their own, three separate journeys
That seem to suggest each prefers, after all,
The pain and pleasure of playing solo. But no.
Each near the end swerves back to the path
Their friend has been plodding, and he receives them
As if he never once suspected their loyalty.

Would I be moved if I thought the music
Belonged to a world remote from this one,
If it didn't seem instead to be making the point
That conversation like this is available
At moments sufficiently free and self-forgetful?

And at other moments, maybe there's still a chance
To participate in the silence of listeners
Who are glad for what they manage to bring to the music
And for what they manage to take away.

"String Quartet" by Carl Dennis, from Unknown Friends. Penguin, 2007.

I really like this poem. it gets a little bit clumsy and didactic near the end, but it reminds me of the importance not just of conversation but of the quality of conversation and the effort that goes into having memorable and heart-felt conversations.

Member Comments About This Blog Post:
SARAWALKS 5/8/2013 10:44PM

I heard a Schuman piano quintet this week and a Mozart violin concerto (in G) that also embodied this ideal.
The last paragraph could even be omitted...
With some people the "remote world" seems to be concretely present.

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    Thanks for this.

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LIBBYL1 5/7/2013 1:42PM

  It is lovely! thank you.... and reminds me of the wonderfulness of just listening ... and of sometimes just being listened to (and really heard)

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JBELICIOUS5 5/5/2013 9:28PM

    I love the meaning of the poem! emoticon for sharing!

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NORWOODGIRL 5/5/2013 9:13PM

    Thanks for sharing this!

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    I liked it too. Gives one a lot to think about.

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MONETRUBY 5/5/2013 8:17PM

    This is beautiful. Thank you.

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4-1HEALTHYCYNDI 5/5/2013 3:05PM

    Wonderful meaning in this poem. Thanks for sharing.

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SPARKCHANTAL 5/5/2013 10:57AM

    I hear you

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