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I'm Moving, by God!

Thursday, April 18, 2013

I can't let them get me down;
I've played their unconscious game too often;
it feeds on itself--
growing--
intensifying--
pleading with me not to change my course,
but to stay sedentary.
I cannot;
for life moves on/
it carries us toward the Sun;
skiing on the waters in the mind-ocean;
treading water makes one tired.
Freedom is skimming the waters' surface
on your faith;
holding on to your teachers--
you have to balance yourself.
One day...
you may even learn
to drive the boat.
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  • ABURRIS2
    Beautiful! Balance is key, isn't it? Blessings as you go. ~ann
    1438 days ago
  • VALERIEMAHA
    Love your poetry-in-prose...or prose-in-poetry...or perhaps better said, free verse! It expresses so elegantly, yet precisely, the challenges you are navigating!

    YES, YOU'RE MOVING!!! And Nicole is right...you own the danged boat -- isn't that good news!!!!!
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    Maha
    P.S. When I saw the title of the blog, I thought it was going to focus on the good news of the FIFTEEN POUNDS that you've rid your beautiful body of.
    1439 days ago

    Comment edited on: 4/19/2013 12:27:37 PM
  • DEBBY4576
    Treading water is not good enough. Thanks for posting what you've learned, and helping yourself and others.
    1440 days ago
  • NONIE_C
    You own that boat. It is yours.
    And you are moving forward, which is what matters most.
    Follow that sun, with it's promise of a new tomorrow!
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    1440 days ago
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