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I'm Moving, by God!


Thursday, April 18, 2013

I can't let them get me down;
I've played their unconscious game too often;
it feeds on itself--
growing--
intensifying--
pleading with me not to change my course,
but to stay sedentary.
I cannot;
for life moves on/
it carries us toward the Sun;
skiing on the waters in the mind-ocean;
treading water makes one tired.
Freedom is skimming the waters' surface
on your faith;
holding on to your teachers--
you have to balance yourself.
One day...
you may even learn
to drive the boat.
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ABURRIS2 4/20/2013 2:06PM

    Beautiful! Balance is key, isn't it? Blessings as you go. ~ann

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VALERIEMAHA 4/19/2013 11:40AM

    Love your poetry-in-prose...or prose-in-poetry...or perhaps better said, free verse! It expresses so elegantly, yet precisely, the challenges you are navigating!

YES, YOU'RE MOVING!!! And Nicole is right...you own the danged boat -- isn't that good news!!!!!
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P.S. When I saw the title of the blog, I thought it was going to focus on the good news of the FIFTEEN POUNDS that you've rid your beautiful body of.

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DEBBY4576 4/18/2013 9:50PM

    Treading water is not good enough. Thanks for posting what you've learned, and helping yourself and others.

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NONIE_C 4/18/2013 6:48PM

    You own that boat. It is yours.
And you are moving forward, which is what matters most.
Follow that sun, with it's promise of a new tomorrow!
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