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The sunlight hurts my eyes.

Friday, March 29, 2013

I feel like I have become Taylor Swift. I wrote a poem and it has everything and anything to do with a guy that recently broke my pretty, beating heart. I can't escape the feeling that this could of been it. THis could of been the big deal, a glimpse of what true love is. The way he held my hand, kissed my forehead and made sure to tell me I am beautiful....than disappeared...unannounced...I couldn't explain to anyone how or why I was feeling because we were a new couple that "fell" so fast for each other. Anyways this is what I sat down and wrote and I figured i'd share...

I let you in
To take control
You take me there
I feel the pull
Sweet tender feelings
Surreal true meanings
Then your eyes tranced
have lost their soul
You pull my hand
And watch me fall
Im spinning round
You make me crawl
Close my eyes
Block my mind
Can I be lost
Inside you this time?
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BILLALEX70 4/3/2013 9:16AM

    Sorry for all this GF. You do have a flair for writing!

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FIGHTING4IT 3/30/2013 12:17AM

    Your poem is amazing! I think you are right about something, it was a "glimpse" of what you could have and WILL have. He wasn't your true one, but you meant him so that you could find out how you deserve to be treated!

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LUCASMOM2003 3/30/2013 12:03AM

    That's a really great poem!

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