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"On the Floor" --- New Original Poem

Sunday, March 17, 2013

So here is another original poem I wrote. I'm undecided about how much this actually represents how I feel, but it is likely that at one time or another we will all deal with something that will make us feel this way. Enjoy!

"On the Floor"

Why even open your heart
When it's gonna all fall apart

'Cause I took a leap
And fell to my feet

How I hate to say goodbye
Forever left wondering why

Can't eat, can't sleep
Just feeling so weak

Curled up on the floor
Please I can't take no more

So empty inside
How I wish I could hide

I know the pain it will pass
I just pray that it's fast.


Member Comments About This Blog Post:
CURVYCC 3/18/2013 4:50AM

    great poem.

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BUSYGRANNY5 3/17/2013 8:12AM

    Love that you're willing to share your poetry with us! Thanks!

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ADELCASALE 3/17/2013 6:40AM

    You have a great talent! emoticon

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PATSYB7 3/17/2013 5:46AM

    Very powerful--thanks for sharing! emoticon

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PHOENIX1949 3/17/2013 4:20AM

    emoticon Thank you for sharing this.

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