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Set Me Free --Another Original Poem

Friday, November 09, 2012

I think this might be my favorite poem I have written so far. I feel like it can be interpreted in many different ways and depending on how I am feeling it means different things to me. I feel like the poem could be about the pain of being trapped physically or emotionally. It could also be a positive poem about finally letting go of what is holding you back. Feel free to interpret it any way you like!

-Set Me Free-

These walls are wearing thin
I think they're about to break
I try to hold them up
But the pressure's too much to take
It's getting hard to breathe
Could you please just let me leave
If only I could scream
Maybe that would set me free.

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JENNIEONFIRE 11/14/2012 8:02AM

    Love it! Set yourself free-allow yourself to fall and pick yourself back up! You are your own Pheonix rebuild yourself from the ashes. You are one of the most motivating people I know-now use that to empower yourself. Love ya!

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LOSINGLINNDY 11/9/2012 3:26PM

    Such an empowering poem. Thank you for sharing it
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PATSYB7 11/9/2012 5:54AM

    Very powerful--you have a gift with words. Thanks for sharing! Enjoy your day. emoticon

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    Very nice.

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