I LIKE IT, BUT ME WITH THE AGING EYES, I DID HAVE TO SQUINT TO READ THE FINER PRINT. I AGREE WITH JUNE ABOVE, TRY SOME IN BLOCK PRINT FOR THE ELDERS WHO DON'T SEE AS WELL. OTHERWISE GREAT JOB!!!
I like it a lot! You might draft it up in a block print and see which is easier to read. Or use both depending on your audience - block print for people like me who squint at script and script for those hip folks with younger eyes.